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March 08

Short Stories
March results:
A
great month. We bounced back with style.
All
but one entry got votes for 1st place, and it got a 2nd. The majority were very
hotly contested and the results were tight. This was a great pleasure to tally.
We had a challenging contest.
Roger
Now,
the results!
Writer's
First Choice: by
one skinny point (15 points followed by 14):
Theodore
Writer's
Second Choice Missed the gold by that famous hair:
Izzy's Egg
Writer's Honorable Mention
Slithering in, just a few scant points back:
Snake
Eyes
Annie Viall
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Izzy’s Egg
Izzy knew all the pitfalls of
moving through the swamps. She knew you never stepped where the swamp
grass wasn’t growing, and if something had eyes, it would definitely
bite you, and quite probably eat you.
She
kept a light step and a wary eye as she hurried toward home where Mamu
was waiting. Izzy was six and didn’t live so long by being ignorant, as
her Mamu called it. She could smell peat burning, and looked forward to
breakfast.
Mamu
was on the porch, beating the dried up swamp mud out of the hut’s rugs.
Izzy ran the last few yards to the porch and smiled broadly at the large
woman who’d raised her. The woman smiled back, gray hair pulled tight
against the nape of her neck; large hands calloused from work,
discolored from dirt and the dyes she worked with for her baskets. She
popped a rug hard, her forearms strong and sure, and then tossed it over
the porch rail.
“What have you found today my little one, my Izzy?” She asked, reaching
for the basket the small child carried. Izzy pulled back a little,
flashing a grin that wasn’t quite all there, one front tooth missing,
the other loose and leaning precariously.
“Wait Mamu!” she said breathlessly “I found something new!”
Mamu
laughed, “Child, there hasn’t been anything new found on this ball of
mud for a hundred years.” She guided Izzy into the hut, and with a
gentle hand towards the small rickety table. Izzy put the basket down,
hopped up in a chair and very carefully pulled back the shredded swamp
grass.
“Here, Mamu. Here are our eggs for breakfast,” Izzy carefully laid out
five fist sized leathery spheres. They were quandat eggs, but when
gathered at the right time, were pretty good eating. Mamu squeezed one,
it was still very pliable. Good.
Izzy
continued to unpack and display that morning’s treasures. A few quandat
claws, found near the nest where she got the eggs, some snail shells for
a necklace she had a mind to string later, and a few small rounded
stones, nothing special, except you didn’t see stones very often on this
gods-forsaken planet.
Suddenly Izzy looked at her Mamu, her eyes big and solemn. “Okay, Mamu.
Here it is. Please be very careful with it.” Mamu just nodded her head,
trying not to laugh at her grand daughter. But when she saw what Izzy
pulled from the bottom of her basket, her breath caught in her throat.
“Oh
Lord, Izzy.” was all she could manage for a moment. Her eyes were locked
on the large sphere the child held with both hands. It was an iridescent
purple in color, with hints and glimmers of green and gold.
While the reptile shells were leathery, this egg was much harder, Mamu
knew, without even touching it. She’d read about them all her life.
“Oh
Izzy,” she said, “let me have it for just a moment.” The little girl
handed it to her, and she held the thing in her hands. It was heavy and
warm, and for some reason she could not explain, she knew it contained
life.
“Get
me the green basket from by the fireplace, please.” Mamu directed.
Izzy
did as she was told, a look of relief on her little face. She brought
the bowl shaped basket to the table, and without being told, she grabbed
handfuls of the shredded swamp grass to cushion the egg.
“What is it Mamu?” she whispered, her big blue eyes intense in her small
dirt smudged face.
“Salvation,” Mamu whispered back.
“Oh
good, I was afraid we’d have to eat him,” Izzy murmured.
While Mamu read and researched until her eyes were red and puffy, Izzy
stayed by the fireplace and watched the egg. She swore sometimes she
could feel it listening to her, so she would sing to it, and talk to it,
telling it stories. She taught it all about the planet that they lived
on, just like Mamu had taught her.
“You
have to be careful everywhere you go,” she recited, “because the swamp
is very dangerous.” She explained about the different types of
amphibians and lizards, large and small, that were all carnivores and
just laid around waiting for ignorant people to blunder by. She told it
that you never ever moved around at night, you just stayed inside and
warm and everything would be okay.
What
Izzy couldn’t explain was how this whole planet had become a prime
example of terra-forming gone wrong. Not enough initial research had
been done to account for all of the planet’s water resources, so after
about twenty years of a nearly earth-like atmosphere, geography, and
topography; the planet had begun to turn into one giant bog.
Mamu’s own great-grandmother had been a biotech on the terra-form team.
Mamu had texts and journals and mysterious things that she guarded very
carefully. She could read most of what was written, though a lot of it
she didn’t understand.
Mamu
knew, from years of reading, and of course oral stories told, that the
first decade after the terra-form collapse had been hell. Only about 30%
of the planet’s pioneer population had opted to jump aboard a rescue
ship and spend the next fifty years traveling to another, hopefully
better, habitable planet. It was a crap shoot, and many chose to stay.
The
wildlife that had been indigenous to the planet was predatory, and
adapted well to the soft muck that was now this planet’s surface. The
remaining populace banded together, and built villages with walls. The
muck and mud claimed the walls, making any attempt at rebuilding futile.
The biotech teams, working out of a rapidly deteriorating base dome,
attempted to manufacture natural enemies to the planets native wildlife,
and merely succeeded in creating cross bred mutant species that were
worse than either ‘parent’.
Hovercrafts and other equipment had been effectively ruined by moisture
and mildew spores. Land equipment was useless; it would trundle along
haphazardly, then mire and sink rapidly in the bogs. Any sort of
technology was becoming obsolete.
Before the earth swallowed up the biotech dome, there had been rumor of
some genetically engineered solution, waiting to be birthed, or hatched.
It would not only hunt and kill predators; it would be useful for
keeping the populace linked to one another, communication between
villages. A self supporting life form genetically engineered to be
intelligent enough to work with mankind.
It
never came to fruition. The dome was consumed by the swamp, and not much
was saved from it. Mamu had the bulk of what was. In those copious notes
and journals were descriptions of that last ditch effort… salvation for
a mired down ball of muck.
Dragons.
“A
near mature egg weighing 8 kilos, purple in color with shows of gold and
green,” Mamu read. “Gestation period assumed to be 38 weeks, heat and
moisture ideal for incubation period, humidity recommended at 85%,
temperatures must be kept in the…”
Mamu
didn’t know spit about temperature or humidity. Mamu knew the peat fire
was warm, and there was plenty of water to keep the soft shredded grass
moist, and indeed they had to be careful the basket didn’t get too hot.
Mamu sensed that whatever was in that egg, it was alive and it was
forming a bond with her Izzy. She only wished she knew what that meant.
Sometimes Mamu thought the only two resources on this planet were mud
and grass. Their diets were limited to fish, eggs, snails, amphibians,
and tubers. Outside of the nearest village there was a large rice paddy,
but growing and harvesting it was a dangerous process.
Between the blood suckers, which were some mutant form of leech that
moved much faster and in groups; and the large carnivorous lizards; the
quandat, and the even larger more aptly named getters, it was a very
dangerous process for such a meager food source, yet rice was prized
because it was so different than the native fare.
Mamu
traded for their rice, some of the finely made baskets that were part of
her livelihood. She could weave a basket so tight it would hold water
for a week. She also delivered new babies as a midwife for the village.
Izzy
showed a knack for weaving at a young age, but she was also very good at
simply finding things. Mamu used to take her along on her foraging
trips, until it became obvious that Izzy not only knew better where to
find eggs and snails, but she had a knack for finding unique things too.
Rocks, pieces of metal, and plastic that could only be remnants of the
base and its equipment, swallowed by the planet then regurgitated for
Izzy to bring home.
That
must be what happened with the egg, Mamu reasoned. It was swallowed up
with the base and then spat out near some quandat nesting ground. Gods,
how many years?
“Mamu,” Izzy said quietly, her big eyes focused on the door. “Someone’s
coming.”
Four
villagers stood on the porch, looking uncomfortable and slightly
rattled. Mamu came out, and closed the door behind her. “Late for a
visit,” She remarked casually. The villagers looked at each other; she
recognized three of them as men she often traded with. The fourth she
didn’t know.
“Mamu,” the eldest spoke for the rest, “This here’s Jorge from South of
the village. He found something no one knows what to make of, so we
thought we’d bring it out here to you.”
She
nodded a greeting to the man as he stepped forward, slinging a large
pouch from his shoulder and placing it on the porch. He looked up at
her.
“Actually ma’am, my son found this and had it hid in a basket by the
fireplace. I don’t know what it is, but the wife says it makes her
uneasy.” He pulled the pouch open and revealed a twin to Izzy’s dragon
egg. This one wasn’t quite as large.
“How
old is your son?” Mamu asked the man curtly.
“Oh,
he’s almost seven now,” Jorge replied.
“Well,” Mamu sighed, “You better leave that thing with me, and bring
your son here tomorrow. He’ll be staying awhile.” She opened the door to
the hut. “Gentleman, you need to come in for a moment.”
All
in all, fifteen eggs were found and hatched over the next five years.
Izzy’s was the first to release the peacock colored, winged reptilian
eating machine that cleared predators for a ten mile radius around
Mamu’s hut. The first time Grunt headed into the swamp Mamu tried to
stop him, afraid he’d be eaten or lost. Izzy calmly sat down on the
porch to wait. “He’ll be back, Mamu,” was all she said.
The
dragon grew at an alarming rate. Izzy also taught ‘Grunt’ to hunt for
them, so they didn’t have to go so far from home. As the dragon got
bigger and more predictable with his appetites, Mamu felt confident
letting Izzy go along. One day the nine year old headed out walking by
the dragon’s side, and returned astride its back.
Mamu
found herself in the unenviable position of midwife to dragon
hatchlings, and temporary nanny to the little ones that had possession
of the eggs. Mamu’s experience was; about three months after hatching
the dragons and children could be returned to their homes.
Each
egg that had been found it seemed, had been found by or in the company
of a young child. Each child in turn formed a strong bond with the egg,
and was present when the egg hatched, as Izzy was with Grunt. There was
a brief moment of eye contact between hatchling and child, and no more.
A
bond was formed, and communication on some level of telepathy began. As
the dragon matured, the communication became more sophisticated. Izzy
explained it to Mamu as pictures at first, but then words and thoughts
as her dragon got older.
Izzy
and Grunt maintained a close watch on all the hatchlings and children
that passed through Mamu’s mud hut.
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The
rice paddies flourished. Mamu broke into ancient sealed containers her
great-grandmother had secreted from the base, and found the cool climate
conducive to certain greens such as cabbage and lettuce.
One
afternoon some of the villagers approached Mamu with an idea for keeping
the area drier. They called it a levy system, an engineering project. A
few minutes into the conversation, Mamu realized they weren’t discussing
this with her at all; they were discussing it with 11 year old Izzy and
her dragon.
Izzy
and Grunt landed in the clearing by the hut. The place really hadn’t
changed much over the years, Izzy thought, except for the gardens. Mamu
had excelled in finding things that would grow; not just food, but
bamboo, and more colorful things as well. The gray-green sameness of the
swamp that haunted her childhood was now banished.
Grunt butted Izzy in the back with his nose. ‘Go on.’
She
patted him on the neck, looking into the golden eyes framed by rainbows.
“Gods, you are such a show off,” she teased.
Mamu
came out of the hut with leggings and a jacket on, her long gray hair
plaited down her back. “’Bout time.” She muttered. Izzy could see she
was nervous.
“You
sit in front of me, Mamu. I don’t need you hijacking my dragon.”
“Fat
chance of that,” She grumbled, casting a wary eye on Grunt as they
approached. He returned the gaze, and Izzy swore he was grinning at the
old woman.
Mamu
scrambled up onto Grunt’s broad back a bit indignantly, Izzy got up
behind her and fastened all the straps around them.
“Grunt’s been looking forward to this,” Izzy said.
“I’ll bet!” Mamu replied, “Probably can’t wait to drop me in the mud.”
Izzy
whistled suddenly and Grunt began the short run that precipitated take
off. His wings had matured when he was 3, before that point he’d been
strictly a land roving dragon.
With
8 years of flying experience now, the two were quite comfortable with
each other.
Mamu, however, just never was keen on the idea. Under her quandat gloves
her knuckles were white.
They
flew over the village first, and Mamu marveled at just how apparent the
growth was form up above. They went out over the levies, so Mamu could
see the almost finished project. Instead of swamp, the levies now held
enough water back that the area was dry inside the walls. As the land
had dried out, and the hunters became the hunted, it became much easier
to survive on this planet.
Mamu
reached out and patted the dragon on the neck “Grunt,” she snorted “We
should have named you Sal.”
‘Indeed,’ Grunt answered the old woman.
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This is the starting of something a lot
bigger.
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I loved this story, it was wonderful.
It pulled me right in and captured me from the beginning.
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What a great tale. This off world
adventure gives us a real good view into a life adapting to a foreign world.
This is awesome. Well done.
Geradine Baugh
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“Lacerta”
“Professor
Chandler, over here I think I found it.”
Three men ran
towards the older woman as she stooped down and carefully brushed off
the loose soil from around the oval egg. She extracted it from the red,
sandy soil then slowly stood up, and smiled with a satisfied look across
her darkly tanned face.
“See,” she held up
the enormous egg with the utmost care. It was four times the size of an
Ostrich egg and bright shimmering blue, “I told you it was here.”
“Right,” James
sneered, “you knew that for a fact.”
“Yes I did. I told
you I had a dream it was here.”
“Okay, okay you
two let it go, at least we have it.” The older man in the group took his
hat off his head and wiped his forehead with his sleeve. “Let’s just get
this back to the lab in one piece, shall we.” The professor tried to
make a call on his cell. He waved it around in the air above his head;
he even climbed up on the hood of one of the Jeeps. ”Damn! No reception!
I should have grabbed the satellite phone instead of this one. Stupid
mistake on my part” He put the phone back into one of his many
pockets, “Lepta you have the honor of carrying that on your lap. We
don’t have a container large enough to hold it, and this bumpy road will
crack it to pieces. It looks like its petrified, but I’d rather have it
back in one piece.”
“No problem
Professor” she said moving carefully with it in her arms toward the
jeep.
“Ray, your the
lead driver, you know this terrain better than anyone.” The Professor
was already collecting the expensive excavating equipment He pointed to
a couple of containers, “James, grab those. The equipment they will come
back with us.”
“What if we need
to come back out in a day or two?”
“Then we’ll bring
it back I don’t want anything to get damaged in a freak sand storm.
Besides we’re not dismantling the tents.”
Lepta carefully
pulled herself up into the front seat of the jeep, Ray jumped in beside
her. There was a second jeep that James and the Professor were quickly
loading up.
“You ready?” Ray
looked at her smiling.
“Sure, there’s no
way this baby is going to get hurt while I’m holding him.”
“Him?” Ray
started the engine, shifted gears then moved carefully over the deep
ruts leading out of the dig site. “How can you be sure there is even an
embryo in that egg?”
“I had a dream.”
“And what did that
dream tell you, Lepta?” He laughed. “We can divide this up for
breakfast, fried, scrambled, and maybe poached. I like poached eggs on
toast.”
She smiled at the
egg, gently caressing the blue shell littered with red flakes.” This is
no ordinary egg. Inside is an evolutionary wonder, a missing link
between man and reptilian.”
“How did it end up
way out here in the desert of Nevada?”
“A lot of things
disappear in the desert; it is the perfect place to hide an old
species.”
James slowed down
as he maneuvered over a ruff patch of rocks and cracks in the dry soil.
He glanced at Lepta; she was staring at the egg in a strange way.
“What's wrong? Is it cracked?”
“No. These red flecks seem to have a pattern.”
“That’s
impossible.”
“No really, look
they almost look like a constellation.”
“Ok, I give.”
James asked with honest interest, “Which one?”
Lepta moved the
egg carefully over n her lap, “I can’t be sure until I compare my star
charts, but it looks a lot like Lacerta.”
“The lizard, huh,
interesting, maybe this thing was pulled out of a black hole. You should
name it Hevelius.” James raised an eyebrow as he looked in her
direction.
“Perfect.” She
muttered, only half listening to Ray. “I can’t wait to see inside.”
Ray slowed the
jeep down to a crawl as he tried to go around larger stones and dirt
piles. It looked as though an earthquake had opened and heaved up the
earth along the road.
“I don’t remember
this being here when we drove in two days ago.” Ray said.
Lepta, looked up
startled she said, ‘Damn, Ray did you see that?”
“I’m trying to get
around this torn up road, what are you talking about?”
“The egg; it
moved.”
“Come on that
thing is petrified.”
“No really, stop
the car!” She yelled agitated.
“What! Why?”
“Ray what if this
is alive? Where is its mother?”
“This is going to
be great; I can’t wait to see the look on the Professor’s face when you
tell him you think this thing is alive. Especially James, he thinks all
this dream stuff is bunk.” Still Ray stopped, Lepta carefully got out of
the car, leaving the egg on the seat. She ran back to the car behind
them.
“The professor and
James were already walking up to her door.
“Professor I think
this egg is alive.”
“Lepta, is this
from your dream?” He wiped the sweat from his face and waited for her
to answer.
“No, the egg moved
and this,” she waved her hand at the road. “Wasn’t like this when we
came in? What if the parent is trying to stop up from leaving?”
“James started to
laugh, “Lepta, no one comes out here because nothing is here. No one
ever saw anything that could lay an egg that big.” He sneered at her,
“If there were others we would have seen egg shells.” He turned and
started walking back to his car, “or foot prints, or even its dung.” He
scoffed at her, “Come on we’re wasting time.”
“What if this spot
was chosen because no one is around here? What if it came from out
there?” She pointed up at the darkening sky.
“Extraterrestrials? Oh. Please. Give me a break!” James never believed
in her before. Now with the heat and frustration and what he considered
her wild imagination he had enough. “First you have us come out here on
a wild goose chase because of your dreams. Now you’re saying this …egg
came from outer space.”
“Okay, that sounds
crazy, but the markings on the egg are of a constellation. It could have
come through from a black hole; just to reproduce. Normally no one comes
out here. We only did because of my dreams.” Lepta turned to the
Professor, “Come on professor, you have been studying my dreams for the
past two years. Have I ever been wrong?” She nervously stumbled over her
words. “Why, why did I dream about this egg? And what tore up the road?
I didn’t feel a tremor. Look down the road,” She pointed ahead of the
cars, “It’s blocked. We will have to drive off road into the cactus.
And did anyone notice, we didn’t hear one coyote or mountain lion, or
even see any desert bighorns?” She watched each mans reaction, “Well?”
Professor Chandler
looked nervous as he searched the area. “You know she’s right. This all
feels strange. I haven’t heard a bird sing in the past two days.” He
looked up at the sky and added, “We’re losing light. Let’s get back to
town.”
“We may have a
problem with that idea. The road is all torn up, we’ll have a hard
time driving at night, and it’s gonna be dark in within the hour.” Ray
watched the darkness creeping up on them. “We may have to stay put
until sunrise, or we’ll end up damaging the tires and it’ll take hours
to walk out of here”
“We need to put
this back first.” Lepta said.
“Put it back are
you crazy, this is a find for the text books.” The Professor answered
angrily.
“We’re standing
here arguing and the suns setting fast, I say we try to drive a little
further up the road and see if the way is clear.” James looked at them
for a second then headed back to his jeep.
Ray shrugged and
went back to his car. Lepta followed and carefully moved the egg onto
her lap again. The jeep roared to life and they started to inch around
the rocks and cactus.
“Ahhh shit!” Ray
said.
”What’s wrong?’
Lepta asked as she held onto the egg.
“Turn and look
behind us at the Professor and James.”
Lepta turned and
watched as the car behind them rose up. The earth pushed upward
underneath their Jeep. Then the ground opened up and their car
disappeared into a chasm.
“We have to stop
and help them.” Lepta yelled.
“Look again! The
ground just closed in around them; we need to get out of here so we can
get help.”
Lepta had turned
and faced forward, when she saw a lizard like creature, with shimmering
green and blue scales crawl out of a hole in front of their jeep. Ray
slammed on the brakes. “Shit, Shit.”
The egg on Lepta’s
lap moved again, this time a small crack appeared then a tiny hole.
“It’s hatching Ray.” she whispered.
“Put it on the
ground, outside the car, very carefully, maybe that thing will leave us
alone.”
Lepta opened the
door, slid out of her seat and set the egg on the ground. The massive
creature was watching her every move. Ray was frozen in the driver’s
seat; as the creature looked from Ray to Lepta. Its tongue slithered out
of its mouth and touched the bumper of the jeep. Lepta quickly got back
into the car. “Ray, Ray try backing up slowly.”
“Stupid bitch,
backup where? There’s a hole behind us.”
“Then move off to
the left, let’s just get the hell out of here.” She replied angrily.
“That thing is
going to eat us.” Ray sniveled.
“No I don’t think
that‘s its plan.”
“Plan, what the
hell you are talking about?”
“Young are hungry
when they’re born. I think if we don’t get out of here we are going to
be eaten by its offspring.” she spoke slowly and evenly, “ This thing
has been coming out here for a while, that’s why there’s no wildlife.”
Clutching the, oh shit handle she said. “I am hoping people aren’t on
its menu.”
They both watched
at the large creature moved around the jeep.
“I saw a movie
where a monster was walking around a car and the idiots rolled up their
windows, like that would stop them from being eaten.” Lepta laughed
nervously. “I hope it works.” She said as he quickly rolled up her
window.
“Did it work in
the movie?” Ray asked as he rolled up his window.
“No, they still
got killed.” She laughed uneasily.
Ray closed his
eyes, and breathed heavily.
The creature moved
over to Lepta’s side of the car and checked out its egg; Ray slowly
started to move the car forward. The Jeep nearly tipped over as they
climbed over the non distinguishable road. Lepta could see the miniature
creature emerging from the egg. Its parent stood and hovered over it
nearly the size of a two story apartment building; waiting. When it’s
young was fully hatched the parent consumed the shell.
“Well that makes
since why we haven’t seen any of those empty shells” Lepta commented.
“It probably cleans up the droppings too.
“It doesn’t seem
to mind us moving away.” Ray said relieved.
“Of course not, if
it wanted to it can catch us in a second.”
“Thanks I really
needed to hear that.” Ray muttered. “Oh, No!”
“What?”
“James just
crawled out of the hole that swallowed his car.”
Lepta turned
around in time to see the young creature grab James by his leg shaking
him until he stopped screaming then started to swallow him whole.
“Oh, my god!” Ray
stopped driving and froze. A dark spot appeared on his jeans.
“Keep driving.”
Lepta said quietl
“What’s the use?”
“My dream, I saw
myself walking into town. I didn’t see that thing behind me, but I know
I will be fine.” She added, “You’re with me. You’ll be fine too.”
“Why? Did you see
me in your dream?”
“Well, not really,
but we are together now, so keep driving.”
At that moment the
adult creature hit their car with its tail and flipped the car. Ray
freaked out and crawled out from the upside down car, dragging himself
across the dusty ground. The adult creature grabbed him; Ray disappeared
faster than James had.
Lepta hung upside
down still strapped in the seat. Quietly she watched as the last rays of
sun slipped beyond the horizon. Then an area of intense darkness
appeared. Lepta knew she wasn’t imagining the black hole that opened up
off to her right. The adult creature shimmered with and iridescent
light as it ushered its young towards the blackness and they both
disappeared inside. The hole closed up as quickly as it appeared.
Lepta lost
consciousness as she released her seat belt and crumpled onto the roof
of the over turned car. It was still dark when she awoke. It was nearly
noon when she walked into town with the professor. They both tried to
explain what had happened out in that desert. But the police and the
doctors all decided that they had head injuries, which caused their
hallucinations.
They were told no one
had ever seen a giant creature like the one they described. One that
traveled through a black hole to give birth and feed its young, it
seemed too preposterous to even conceive of such an idea…
Besides, a lot of
people disappear in the desert.
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Great storyline, but in desperate need of some background
investigation and research and some believability, as in survivors crawling
out of a hole in the road that closed in over them. This piece deserves the
work.
Paul Mannering
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Snake Eyes
The mist flowed thick and grey
like a river in flood. The vapours feathered edges lapped against the
bound fastenings of the tents under the canopy of the Java rainforest.
Soon the sun would rise and the mist, so like a shadow cast by shadows,
would melt away and the expedition would emerge and continue their
exploration.
Cotter, the nephew of the Earl of Cotswold, who specialised in
butterflies, pecked with his long fingers at the ties of his tent. With
the determined focus of a chick emerging from its egg he plucked and
chipped away at the bonds until the opening was wide enough for him to
scramble out. Scuttling to his feet, he hurried to the first line of
nearby trees, his legs clenching, and a hand pressed to the crotch of
his hastily fastened khaki trousers.
The
native porters and camp staff watched with some amusement from their
hammocks. They were in no hurry, the white men would have to order them
to revive the cooking fires, load up the heavy packs, and start walking
before they felt any need to stir.
Harris, the expedition leader and graduate of the English privilege
system of raising fine gentlemen, emerged from his slightly larger tent
as Cotter returned to the camp. The two came together near the stacked
boxes of tinned food supplies.
“Morning Cotter,” Harris said amiably, his cold pipe clacking against
his teeth.
“Good morning Harris,” Cotter responded and then blinked myopically
several times. “Nice day for it,” he added.
“Indeed. I think it’s our lucky day old chap.” Harris, like Cotter was
Oxford educated. They strode the furthest reaches of the British Empire
as if they owned it, which of course her Majesty did.
Cotter nodded. He felt sure any objections he voiced would be swept
aside by the rod and staff of Harris’s arrogant assumption that even the
natural world would instinctively bend to the will of an English
Gentleman. To Harris’s credit, so far the natural world had done just
that.
Starting with the interminable journey by steamship from England, the
cowering, wide eyed cowering attitudes of the natives whom none-the less
clamoured to offer their services as porters and guides for a coins a
day. The expedition had proceeded in an orderly fashion that Harris
announced was a testament to the superiority of the Empire and the
British Gentlemen.
“Alright you dogs! Up and at ‘em! Kayo!! Kayo!” Harris swaggered
towards the native area of the camp, scattering the dark skinned chaps
before him like birds with chattering voices and gleaming white teeth.
Harris had been told by the first mate of the ironclad steamer the
Clarence, that Kayo was the native word for “Hurry up.” The porters only
moved because he paid them. Kayo was the cry babies made when calling
for their mothers. The natives thought it was appropriate that Harris
should cry in such a way, the Englishmen were indeed babes in the wood.
After a luxurious breakfast of tinned beef, camp bread and sweet black
tea, the porters hefted their bundles and boxes aloft and fell in behind
Harris and Cotter. The expedition was lead by the a nimble footed
guide, a chap with missing front teeth who called himself Lu. To the
English Lu looked like any other local. The porters stayed away from
Lu. He was not born of any of their tribes, clans or family groups. He
was cut from an altogether different cloth, one whose fibres were dyed
in dark sorcery and ancient secrets. Whenever Lu’s yellow-eyed gaze
fell upon any of the porters they would shy like a startled horse,
rolling their eyes and muttering wards against evil. Lu would just
grin, poke his narrow tongue out through the gap in his teeth, and wave
it at them like a serpent tasting the smell of their fear.
Under the canopy of the vast trees was a different world. Monkeys and
birds called constantly, many hurling abuse and cries of alarm at the
pale sweating figures who dared to enter this unconquered empire. The
English explorers, lead by Harris (in turn closely followed by Cotter)
led a casually traversing human centipede of many bare brown legs, laden
with boxes, crates, trunks and baskets that followed the intrepid
twosome into what for them, was unexplored jungle.
After the morning mist had burned away and the heat of the day was
becoming oven-like the rain started. First rumbling thunderclouds and a
dark bruise swelling in the sky. The clouds ruptured and the rain
poured down with a noise that made conversation below a shout
impossible.
Harris and Cotter endured the rain with British determination.
Initially they had used their umbrellas to shield from the worst of it,
but the volume of the deluge had crushed the bamboo stays the thick
foliage had torn the black material.
It
was of course the porters who noticed it first, the animals of the
jungle were accustomed to rain, and it was as much a part of their daily
existence as the trees and plants that surrounded them. The rain never
silenced the creatures for long; they sought shelter and called, hooted
and warbled at each other without pause. It was the silence that rose
behind the rain as they trudged on through the emerald midday twilight
that had them casting long looks at each other and fearfully peering
into the darker shade on all sides.
The
carriers were sure that these foolish pale men from across the sea would
have turned back by now. They had shown a disappointing lack of
softness when it came to enduring the hardships of the jungle. There
had been great humour among the men at the beginning, a few days walking
through the wilderness, with two pale, almost femininely delicate
British men. The way they had fussed over all manner of contraptions
and supplies had been a great source of mirth. Now, ten days later they
continued to walk further away from the areas that their hirelings knew
and into deeper, darker jungle. The white men were seeking Sa-Eng Pok,
the City of Ghosts. Abandoned by all right thinking men in the days
when the world was young, inhabited now by evil spirits and the demons
who fed on human flesh.
The
porters slowed further as the rain eased and the roar of the torrent
became the steady drip of the secondary showers of rainwater trickling
down from the high canopy. The distance between the porters and the
leaders increased until each end of the party was a dim shadow against
the khaki backdrop.
Cotter stopped, swept his hat off and mopped his streaming brow.
Turning back he peered into the gloom of the winding way they had been
following for the better part of a day.
“Harris… Harris!” Cotter called again, louder this time. Harris
appeared around a mammoth hardwood tree trunk.
“Yes, Cotter?” Harris stood with his hands on his hips and his
countenance that of a school master.
“The porters!” Cotter waved down the empty trail.
“Oh
they will be along presently. Probably just having one of their blasted
tea-breaks.”
Harris sighed and sank back again a tree root that rose thick and wide
to waist height.
“I
think I should go back and find them,” Cotter was a perpetual worrier.
If his family hadn’t contributed so much to the cost of this adventure
Harris would have never brought him along.
“If
you like Cotter,” Harris closed his eyes and relaxed. A cup of tea
would be just the thing right now, or even better a nice pint of ale.
Cotter stumbled and slid on the uneven surface of tree roots and thick
leaf litter until he had vanished back along the path so recently
traversed.
* * * * *
Harris opened his eyes to darkness, lit only by the glow of a nearby
campfire.
“What on earth?” He struggled to sit up and found his limbs securely
bound.
“Cotter!? … Lu!? Blast you all! What is the meaning of this?”
“Shhh…. Shhh….” The grinning face of the guide Lu appeared in Harris’s
vision. “Kayo….Kayo…” Lu mimicked the tone of the white man’s commands
and grinned again.
“Lu, untie me immediately blast it. What do you think you are doing?!”
Lu sat back on his haunches, eyes dark and glittering, and the yellow
stained whites almost golden in the flickering light of the campfire.
“Shhh…Shhh…” Lu crooned again, the hissing sound coming through the open
cavity of his missing teeth honed to a soft whistle.
“This is old country Sahib Harris. Old…old country. The white men
always going to new countries, forgetting they are old places. We stay
in one place learn everything about the old country, the forest and the
stones. Always listening, always learning. No need to leave and go see
new country eh?” Lu grinned and his tongue darted out, long and thin.
“Untie me damn you,” Harris struggled again while Lu simply crouched and
waited for his captive’s heaving to subside.
“Old country, with old gods. You speak of your Jesus God. Your
missionaries come here and they tell us about this Jesus God. Where is
this Jesus God I ask them? They say he is all around us. But I can
never see this Jesus God. So I show them missionaries our god. Our god
who is real. Our god who comes in the night and tastes the flesh of our
enemies. Our god who grants us blessings now, not in heaven-place.
“What are you blathering about Lu!?” Harris was staring at the little
native man with distilled fury. There was going to be hell to pay when
he got free.
Lu
rose to his feet and grabbed Harris by his boots. With out a word he
turned the prostrate man ninety degrees, so his gaze was staring past
the fire to the strange gathering that lay beyond.
The
porters, simple men with simple beliefs were grovelling before a
glistening green statue. Harris stared as a trick of the wavering fire
light showed the effigy was moving.
Horror flooded through his blood as he realised that the statue was a
living thing. A vast glittering scaled serpent. Larger than any South
American Anaconda, the girth of this creature would have taken two full
grown men to reach around it, as thick as many of the trees that
surrounded the campsite it’s scaled hide rippled and undulated with
strange lumps and moving enlargements.
On
the ground before the monster the porters writhed and twisted in dark
parody of the creature above them. Harris watched his throat tight with
helpless terror as the scaled beast opened a vast maw that was near
bursting with long yellowed teeth. With a sudden jerking motion the
snake god snatched up a squirming porter and crushed his screams and his
skull with savage swallowing spasms.
Those who remained moaned and panted. Their shrieks pierced the air as
they chanted and howled in an ecstasy of terror. Harris struggled and
mewled against the torturous noise, so bound and impotent to resist the
awful realisation of this repulsive reality playing out before him.
“Kop-a-lee! Kop-a-lee! “ Lu rose to his feet and clapped his hands.
Immediately the nearest porters scrambled over and cowered under his
gaze.
“Take him,” Lu said and gestured towards the bound Harris.
The
porters snatched Harris off the ground and carried him above their heads
like a log towards the swaying god.
The
man carrying Harris’s feet lowered them to the ground, and he was raised
to a standing position scant feet away from the hideous entity that the
natives worshipped as a living god.
Harris resolved not to scream. He was an Englishmen and would meet his
fate with dignity. The long serpentine form elongated, rising higher
above him till it towered ten feet or more and still a great length of
it was coiled in the darkness beyond the fire’s glow.
The
explorer raised his head and met the glowing golden-eyed gaze with his
own unblinking eyes. The great mouth opened and Harris’s jaw fell open
in slack-jawed disbelief.
The
snake god’s vast head slowly dipped forward and Harris began to scream.
He screamed until his throat tore and his voice shattered and then he
continued to shriek, soundless, whispering exhalations of catatonic
terror. Harris’s rational mind disintegrated as he gazed into that
abominations gullet.
Gripped in the pulsing embrace of the snake’s gullet, his flesh seared
to the bone by the onslaught of digestive juices, Cotter clawed against
the impermeable viscera of the snake god in blind helpless agony.
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Ooooo, gross, a Good story, but icky
ending. Yuk
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Graphic, but too predictable and not
enough motive. Growing this story to fill in the gaps and provide the motive
would do it wonders.
P.S. Gifford
4
Theodore.
Theodore stretched out lazily
on the perfectly manicured back garden lawn. The grass was the color
of Astro-Turf, almost too perfect to be real, yet its softness and
aroma proved it otherwise. The sun was high in the clear January
summer Tauranga sky and he yawned lethargically as he examined his
secluded back yard slice of New Zealand paradise. His gaze landed on
the neatly planted white and pink portoluca moss roses, their hearty
blooms fully open and welcoming the eighty degree plus heat, that
would shrivel less resilient flowers, and he yawned languorously
With Theodore’s imagination overrunning with tranquil thoughts, and
the sun’s soothing rays upon his back eradicating any remaining
remnants of stress, his eyelids began to droop as he gradually eased
into a deep, serene, sleep.
Several idyllic moments pass, as his breathing became deeper and
slower.
All of a sudden, his eyes spring open. Now full of urgency he is
brusquely transported from that magical twilight between being
consciousness and dreams back to full brutal consciousness. Through
blinking eyes he discovered what had been the cause of his
disturbance. Focusing his stare on an enormous horsefly flitting on
his side, and whose mandibles were penetrated into Theodore’s skin
like tiny serrated scimitars. After retrieving a small chunk the fly
began to consume hungrily. Buzzing his wings in revelry and
satisfaction as it ate.
Theodore glowered angrily at the insect gorging himself and managed,
despite the pulsating pain, to remain perfectly motionless. His
steady, cold eyes glared at the tiny predator, seemingly unaware
that he was being watched, analyzing its every minute movement. The
fly, upon finishing his apparent appetizer, prepared to slice away
his main course, a bigger chunk of Theodore’s skin. Turning about
his mandibles were poised to slice away once more…
Being both Swift and silent, Theodore opened his mouth wide and
stealthily unfurled a lashing eight inch blue tongue. With expert
precision he used that tongue to promptly swoop the unsuspecting fly
up in one hundredth of a second, not allowing the fly the merest
fraction of an instant to react. Theodore closed his mouth
forcefully; crushing down on the fly, then with a single hearty gulp
swallowed the insect whole.
Satisfied at his mid afternoon snack and managing to ignore his
throbbing side, Theodore wiggled on the grass. Soon he uncovered a
relaxing position that was both comfortable and managed to maximize
the comforting rays of sun. Within moments he was once more
returning to the slumber he had been so rudely ripped from. A second
fly, buzzed around him, but managed to catch an uncomfortable look
in Theodore’s eyes, and obviously reconsidering, buzzed off over the
hedgerows into a neighbouring garden.
Yawning contently again, he heard a voice; a familiar friendly
female voice.
Once more fully awakened and alert he raced with enthusiasm over the
grass to the garden’s wrought iron back gate.
Jessica looked down at her pet Savannah monitor lizard and smiled,
seemingly in sharp contradiction to her disdainful shaking of her
head. She spoke softly, trying, but failing dismally, to sound
angry.
"Theodore, this is the third time this week you have escaped from
your aquarium to baste in the afternoon sun; you are such a Devil…”
The end.
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Very sweet story, the pets reaction to its
owner and the love conveyed in those simple words, “you are such a Devil”
wonderful feel to a great story…
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So cool, I love this. Of course you had
me at the beginning thinking it was a person until his purple tongue flicked
out to eat the bug. Too cool.
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Just need to get this cute story back
to the Terrarium. This Savanna lizard wouldn’t do too well in a water tank.
No wonder he kept escaping.
Marian (Sparky)
Huyck Grossi
5
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THE APRICOT TREE
“…
it’s done!”
“Thank heaven, now maybe I can breathe without thinking the authorities
will be on our tail.”
“For
crying out loud, you’re such a pansy!”
‘I
heard yelling from the neighboring house … again. The day is a lot like
any other,’ Robert thought.
***
“I’m going to wait and see how it all pans out. Not going to get myself
in a fix, just going to keep on watching. No one knows I can see them.
I can see both of them in their house and Robert in his. Wish they
would all stop and get on and end this, so I can write another story.
They are wasting my time for sure. Hang in there with me; we’ll wait
this one out. Time is on our side, all right with you?”
***
“All
right, let’s get. We’ll be late for our job. Damn! I get so tired of
sweeping up after them, and dusting. And you! You’re no prize when it
comes to working, what with you looking at them all of the time. Come
on, get a move on.”
He
stumbled toward the door while trying to put a leg into his jeans. He
looked like a flamingo doing a one-legged dance. Grunting while locking
the beat up old door he took a deep breath and headed toward the steps.
Being careful not to trip and get his foot hung up in a few of the
missing boards on the steps, he headed toward the car.
“Hurry! The traffic is getting heavy I just know it,” May said in a very
disgusted tone.
When
he got into the ’39 Plymouth, he hit bottom on the floorboard.
“Crap! I can’t stand this damned car! I’m tired of winding up on the
floorboard. The seat, what is left of it, has only springs, this hunk
of junk! Why can’t we get another car?” Angus asked.
“Quit your griping! Every single day you say the same thing. I’m tired
of it! There is nothing I can do to change things right now, so lighten
up.”
“When are we going to get a car so I can drive. It isn’t right, you
driving and me sitting on the floor. You ought to try it, it’s no fun.”
“I
tried your seat, that’s why I am driving. If you would have thought
about it fast enough you would be driving and I’d be sitting on the
floor. Besides, you’re tall enough to see out the window. I’m too
short and have to look at all of the wires and stuff under the dash
board, what with the glove compartment door gone.”
“Okay! Okay! I just wished. That’s all I was doing … wishing. You
never wished anything before?”
“Yes! I’ve wished and right now I’m wishing you’d shut your damned
mouth, it’s hard enough weaving in and out of this traffic. Damned
fools ought to know I’m driving us to work; after all, we drive the same
route every day. They see us everyday. I wish they would just move
over on the freeway and let us through.”
***
Every day when I check on those two they are repeating themselves over
and over. It’s almost as though they are re-playing the same record.
It’s comical in a way and I find I look forward to their antics. Quite
the lot, they are. Specimens. One of a kind. Odd ducks. I’ll check
in with you every so often and give you the skinny on what’s happening.
Right now they are on their way to work where they have beenemployed for
as long as anyone remembers. No one knows much about them, just that
they are rarely outside and yell at each other every day.”
***
Looking over the back yard fence Robert wasn’t too surprised at what he
saw. He hollered at Jackson, his neighbor, to come on over.
Jackson put his pruning shears down on the webbed patio chair and walked
across the tree-lined street.
“What you got there Robert?” Jackson asked.
“I
want you to come here and take a look. Do things look a bit different
out there?” he pointed toward the backyard of his next-door neighbor.
“I
don’t see much different, things look about the same,” Jackson replied.
“See
the mound over there? Look right under the apricot tree,” Robert said.
“Still don’t see a thing Robert, you must have been out in the sun too
much and it fried your brains,” Jackson laughed as he looked at Robert
who had a very serious look on his face.
Robert was determined to find out what the mound was all about. He
asked Jackson to keep a look out for him as he got his folding Army
spade he had bought at the Army Surplus Store down on Sixtieth and Maple
streets.
“Give me a leg up Jackson.”
With
hands clasped together Jackson told Robert to step up.
Robert stepped on Jackson’s clasped hands with one foot and with a push
hoisted himself over the fence. It suddenly hit him, “What if there is
something in the yard I don’t know about? I wish I wouldn’t have
thought about that, now it’s the only thing that’ll be on my mind!”
Robert mumbled.
“What’d you say buddy?”
Robert shrugged his shoulders, “Ah nothing, just muttering to myself.
Didn’t know I was that loud.”
Standing near the fence, Robert scanned the yard. Everything in the
yard was dry except the mound under the frail apricot tree.
Shrugging his shoulders Robert went to the apricot tree and with his
Army spade began digging the area where the mound was. He was startled
when he felt his spade hit something. He dug more feverishly, wanting
to know what his spade had hit. When he got a deep furrow dug around
the object he got down on his knees and began digging dirt out with his
hands.
“Hey
there Robert! You okay?” Jackson asked.
“Yeah, I’m almost through with the digging and then we’ll find out
what’s under the mound. Keerist!” he yelled.
***
I’ve been watching as two scenes are playing out. Angus and May are
nearly at the place where they work. Robert is digging in their back
yard while Jackson is his look out man. It is quite a scene I’ll tell
‘ya; two upscale neighbors wondering what their dirt poor looking
neighbors are doing in their back yard. Seems to me it ought to be the
other way around. I guess it just goes to show you one never knows
about people and what they’ll do next. It’s time now for me to let you
get on with your snooping in the business of the two and of Robert and
Jackson. I’ll keep on watching and when I think you ought to be
informed of what’s happening I’ll let you know. I have to be alert to
any twists and turns since I’m telling this story and must get it right.
***
“This drive is getting more hair-raising as each day passes by.”
“And
this floorboard gets harder as each day passes by.”
“We’ve had this conversation a million times!”
It
wasn’t long and the 1939 Plymouth pulled into the parking lot. Today
they found a parking place near the employee’s entrance and parked.
May
pointed to Angus and firmly said, “Grab our lunches.”
“Yeah, yeah, I’ll grab ‘em. Why do I always get the grunt jobs? Why
don’t you carry our lunches in once in a while? I feel stupid always
carrying them in.”
Laughing out loud, “You’re fine, just fine. Come on, get a move on.”
They
entered through the heavy door and heard it creak closed like they did
everyday. Opening another heavy door the two began the descent to the
area where they worked. The stuffy smell had a stench like something
dead, but they didn’t notice, they were used to it.
Putting on their white coats and face masks, they began their tedious
job.
With
small brushes they picked up what looked like a large rock and began
carefully brushing away the centuries old sand.
“We’re making progress, doesn’t it make you happy?”
“Sure, sure I’m laughing, can’t you hear me?”
“Oh
my god, hush, come around the table."
Angus walked around and stood beside May. She acknowledged his presence
and continued brushing the ages old sand. Soon they saw a slight tinge
of blue in places. Picking up the object, they looked at one another
and continued brushing it.
The
pile of sand on the table was getting larger and the blue began to blend
in with what looked like pinks. This was a most awesome piece of work,
one they had never seen.
“Hand me the chisel, will you.” Silently the chisel passed hands.
With
a slight tap the chisel made its way through the rock hard sand, giving
way to more faded looking colors. The piece was taking shape, one they
couldn’t identify yet. They wondered if it went with the piece they had
at home.
“What do you think it is?”
“I
think a lot of things and hope for one, but we’ll never know until I get
it cleaned off.”
***
I feel as though I’m watching a movie, but it is not so. I’m watching
everything in the here and now and in living color. Things are
happening at a much speedier pace now and I’m hoping to learn as much as
you very quickly. Let’s get on with the real-life stories. They do say
fact is stranger than fiction.
***
Robert got back to his digging. He heard a stepping sound behind him on
the dried brown dicondra and it startled him. “Wha...?” he said in a
shaky voice.
“It’s me, Jackson,” and Robert felt a hand on his shoulder.
“Jackson! You scared me half to death!”
“It’s all right partner, it’s just me come here to help you out.”
“We
have to be quiet, the neighbors on the other side are home and in their
backyard. Just our luck!”
Deciding they had better get back over the fence, they quietly backed
away from the hole, but two things happened then: the neighbors went
back inside their house and the May and Angus were in their house
yelling again, which meant they were home from work.
Robert and Jackson looked at each other.
From
inside the house May could be heard, “Angus, I think we are going to be
rich! Very rich! We found the rest of it, didn’t we? We work well
together, I’m glad we met each other all those years ago. Come on;
let’s go bury it next to the other until we know what we’re going to
do. We can’t have anyone finding it.”
From
the side of the tattered house, Jackson and Robert watched and listened
as the two came out of the house carrying a bundle with them. They
couldn’t tell what it was; it was wrapped in a gunnysack.
They
nudged each other and pointed to the wrapped object. Whispering, Robert
said, “What do you think they have in their hands Jackson?”
“Shhh Robert, keep it down, let’s watch.”
“May! Here, over here, that’s where we put the first one. Someone has
been digging around. I know because I put a quartz rock at exactly noon
and it’s gone.”
Robert patted the pocket of his jeans. He looked at Jackson and said,
“I’ve got the damned rock in my pants pocket!”
“It’s too late now to worry about the rock, just keep quiet and watch.”
Once
again Angus motioned to May. She walked over and saw that the mound had
been tampered with. “What the hell? Isn’t anything sacred anymore?
Our own backyard and still they hound us!”
“May, be quiet as a church mouse.”
Looking around very slowly, Angus shined the light on the side of the
house. He moved the beam down the side of the house, but couldn’t see a
thing for all of the pieces of wood, wire, and old tires standing
askew.
When
he ran the light on the ground he saw a pair of shoes. “Who’s there?”
Angus began to walk in the direction of the shoes. He raised the light
up and shined it into the faces of his neighbors. “What’re you doing in
our back yard? You don’t know us any other time, what are you doing
here?”
“We…
we…,” Jackson stuttered, “we climbed over the fence, we wanted to see
what you had under the apricot tree. We got the spade and came to find
out.”
“Are
you satisfied? Did you find what you thought you would?”
“Well, yes, we found a piece of art we think. What is it?”
Angus said, “May, come here, look what I found.”
“What
are you doing in our back yard?”
May
looked at Angus and asked, “What’ll we do with’em Angus? You have the
good ideas around here.”
Angus laughed, “I think we ought to let them see what we have here and
then they’ll have to keep quiet. If they say anything they can be
charged with felony theft, not to mention trespassing.”
May
ordered everyone to follow her across the yard. When they got near the
apricot tree, she showed them what they had dug and re-buried and what
she and Angus had wrapped in the gunnysack. Jackson and Robert were
shocked, the pieces matched. Before them was the most beautifully
crafted burial artifact they had ever seen. It was a bird, yet it
almost looked like it belonged in another world. The colors, although
faded and scratched in a few places, were covered with a pearl-like
glow.
All
four of the neighbors sat down on the dried dicondra and looked at the
beautiful artifact. When they scratched a little of the surface, they
saw what looked like solid gold. They decided to divide the money they
would make in half. They shook hands and said goodnight.
Angus and May pretended to bury both pieces in a hole they had dug
nearby. Instead, they took the pieces and buried them beneath the pile
of old tires on the side of the house. “We’ll get out in the morning and
take it to the dealer. Come on let’s go eat dinner Angus.”
***
I
imagine that night they were all dreaming about their take. The gold
must weigh at least twelve to fifteen pounds, I’ll find out when I get
it melted down and sell it. Angus and May made my job easy, maybe I’ll
send them a few gold nuggets, I don’t know yet.”
***
END
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This has a lot of twists and turns I
enjoyed reading this story.
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This needs some plot holes filled, but
what a great plot. This could become something big… and scary.
Kath
6
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Intrusions
Any
intrusion during the night gets attention. When there is a pattern to
strange events, everyone involved gets a little freaked out, even State
Troopers. The first time was about a month after Frank and Tookie moved
to the country, a peaceful and isolated spot. It sure was quiet. The
dogs loved the space, the woods and streams, little critters to chase in
the fields. In fact, all of them were pretty shocked when the noise
started. It was just too peaceful for that kind of noise at 3am.
The dogs woke Frank and Tookie. All
three dogs crowded together at the top of the stairs, barking like fury.
Someone was on the front porch. A shadow cut across the glass in the
door, but the curtain kept them from seeing anything except the outline
of a form. Within seconds, knocking started and within a few more
seconds, knocking changed to pounding. The barking and the pounding
contained similar fury.
Frank and Tookie froze, at first.
Then Frank grabbed the billy club and started down the stairs with the
club raised. They looked at each other as if to say, “This simply cannot
be happening.” The pounding increased and the shadow loomed large
against the door. They tried to look out the window to see anything that
would help explain what was happening—a car broken down in front of the
house, someone bleeding or delivering a baby, a lost kid—but nothing was
in sight.
“Call 911 and get away from the
windows,” Frank said to his wife. He stood by the door with the club.
“Hello, emergency dispatch service,
how can I help you?”
“Please, we need help. Someone is
pounding on our door and we have no idea who or why.”
“When did this start, ma’am?”
“Just a few minutes ago.”
“And you’re sure it’s not someone you
know?”
The pounding was getting louder and
louder, pounding on the glass, pounding on the door, but no one was
calling out, no one was asking for help. The shadow against the curtain
looked the size of a bear…big, wide, huge head, arms swinging.
“No. We don’t know anyone anyway.
We’re new here.”
“I see you’re in Kingsworthy
Township. I’ll have to transfer you to the State Police dispatcher. The
township has no local police coverage at night on the weekend. Hold on
please. Hello, this is emergency dispatch in Kingsworthy Township. I’m
transferring this caller to you. Someone is knocking on the door and
they aren’t expecting anyone. Ma’am, don’t hang up. I’m transferring
your call.”
“Hello, Ma’am. This is State Police
dispatch #46782. How can I help? My information tells me you’re at
Hochenburg Road, right?”
“Yes, please hurry. This is so
frightening. It’s getting worse by the minute.”
“Yes, I hear the noise. Are they your
dogs? Is anyone there with you besides the dogs?”
“My husband is here. Please—send
someone.”
With that, the door flew open and the
intruder was inside but just for a moment. Frank raised the club to
strike and the shadow froze in fear.
“No! Don’t hurt me! I’m cold! I’m
looking for Frank…I’m a friend of Cory, Frank’s son. I’m cold. Frank
knows me. Cory’s friend.”
Wrong Frank. This Frank had no son.
He shouted at the intruder to get away, that the police were on the way.
“OK, good. It’ll be warm in the
police car. I’ll wait for them,” and he backed down the porch steps onto
the lawn. He was trembling and looked as scared as Frank and Tookie.
The dispatcher heard the hollering
and asked for a description of the intruder. He wanted to keep them
talking until the troopers got there. After what felt like an hour but
was probably more like three minutes, the police car slowly came up the
road, looking for the house. As soon as he saw the trooper’s car, the
intruder went toward them and spread himself on the hood with his hands
raised. He knew the drill.
Frank and Tookie could hear voices of
the troopers as they questioned the intruder. Soon, one of the officers
came to the front door. He was polite but had more questions than
answers. Once they convinced him that this Frank wasn’t Cory’s father,
he loosened up. He told them that the young man was drunk, got into a
fight with his buddies who then threw him out of their car. He landed in
a ditch and was soaked. It was a cold night and he was shivering, trying
to get inside where it was warm. He had on a parka, but it was wet and
provided no warmth. The fur trimmed hood made his shadow look big as an
oak tree against the curtain in the door.
He also told the troopers that this
friend Cory was killed in a car accident not long ago and he thought
Cory’s parents lived in the house. The kid had missed his friend’s
funeral but he knew Cory’s parents would take him in. The trooper said
he remembered the accident, said it was one of the worst he had seen. He
was on duty that night and saw Cory’s body torn to shreds, mangled by
the impact and flipping car. It was so bad that no one was sure of the
identity of any of the kids in the car until relatives identified
belongings such as clothing, jewelry, things like that.
It was the wrong house on the wrong
road, but the kid was drunk and didn’t really know where he was. He was
charged with criminal mischief and everyone tried to calm down and move
on.
Frank and Tookie told the few people
they knew in the area about their scare. No one could remember the last
time anything like that happened. Nobody got their house broken into,
especially at 3am. They sure did remember the accident that killed Cory,
though. Different road, different family, different town. But all the
kids knew each other. It was a big family of friends and the shock
lingered. They lost one of their own in every parent’s nightmare. A car
accident in the middle of the night.
After that happened, all the boys in
Cory’s class started wearing tee shirts with these weird eyes on them.
They said it was so the world would know that they were all looking for
Cory all the time, and they were looking out for each other. The eyes
looked like some kind of monster eyes. Since none of them knew what a
monster looked like for real, they did the best they could with the
decal design. Someone’s mom had the shirts made up.
A month passed between the first and
second middle-of-the-night event. Same drill, same scare, same night off
for the township cops. Dogs barking, shadow on the porch, but no
pounding this time. They could hear the porch furniture being moved
around and hoped it was an animal of some kind. But then they heard the
guitar strumming, softly, sweetly. No singing, just strumming.
A call to the 911 operator got the
transfer to the state police dispatch, who remembered the first event.
He sounded dubious this time and asked if they were sure it wasn’t a
neighbor or one of the family who stayed out too late. They convinced
him to send help but when the cops got there, no one was on the porch.
There were footprints leading down the walk and into the road but no
other signs.
So the cops hung around for a while
to keep an eye out but there was nothing else they could do.
The next morning, they saw the weird
eyes painted on the door of the tool shed. There was no way they could
convince the cops that they did not have anything to do with the
artwork. This was all beginning to sound too strange.
The third and final time the noise
came in the middle of the night, it wasn’t from the porch but from the
basement. The dogs were completely frenzied, the cat ran up the tree in
the back yard, Frank again stood frozen with the club in his hand and
Tookie thought she was going to have a heart attack. The pounding in her
chest wouldn’t quit.
Same drill, same call to 911, same
transfer to state police dispatch, but the response was much slower this
time. They might as well have said, “Yeah, we know. Knocking again. OK.”
Frank and Tookie were beginning to think that whatever was going on was
not going to hurt them. Tookie entertained some strange ideas. She was
becoming convinced that Cory was playing tricks from wherever he ended
up.
They stood by the door leading into
the basement and heard the same sweet guitar sounds. No voice, just the
guitar. When the police pulled into the driveway, the music stopped. The
police found the outside doors to the basement latched from the outside,
just like it was supposed to be. When they entered the basement from the
inside of the house, no one was there. Those weird eyes were painted on
the wall, though, and footsteps were found outside, leading to the road.
The prints stopped in the middle of the road and vanished into thin air.
This time a different trooper
responded and he could see that Frank and Tookie appeared sane and
sober, or at least believable. He decided it was time they knew. They
could make their decision for themselves but they needed to know the
truth about Cory, his accident and the aftermath. He took a chance, sat
at the kitchen table and talked to them for about an hour.
It seems that the accident occurred
on the road about a quarter mile from their front door. It was in the
middle of the night and there were a bunch of kids in the car. Cory was
the only one who died; the others were all hurt but lived. The
authorities were never sure if the body they had was really Cory. They
didn’t do DNA tests but relied on the parents’ identification of the
fragmented remains.
Each of the kids who survived swears
that they have seen Cory since that night, always in the dark, always on
that road, always with his guitar. When they try to stop and talk with
him, he disappears, vanishes into nowhere. One of their buddies was
arrested about six weeks ago and charged with criminal mischief for
trying to break into a house he says Cory visits. The house belonged to
the family of Cory’s girlfriend, Ramona. The family moved away after the
accident. Ramona was never the same. She had a nervous breakdown and
imagined that Cory was coming to visit her at night. She swore she heard
him singing to her. Her parents got help for her but nothing worked, not
therapy, not medicine, not distraction, not prayer, nothing. So they
moved to Arizona or somewhere like that.
Ramona is the one who designed the
decal. She said it was from a drawing left on the ceiling of her room, a
drawing she believes came from Cory. He wrote a song for her titled “Her
Eyes.” The trooper just spilled out the story and seemed relieved when
he finished.
“You know, I was one of the
responders on the night of the accident. I’m sure I heard a soft guitar
after everyone left the scene. And I’ve heard it since. I wish the
township would get its own police coverage on the weekends. None of us
want to come out here. Every stinking Saturday night, we get called for
something bizarre on this damned stretch of road. Every Saturday night.”
Frank and Tookie were going to leave
but decided to stick it out for a little while and see what happened.
Once their fear subsided, the dogs calmed down and they actually enjoyed
the music. Sometimes on a warm night when the windows are open it sounds
like the sweet guitar is being played by the angels somewhere out in the
field. And every once in a while they see those weird eyes on another
tree trunk. It’s been three years now and they love the peace and quiet.
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Roger Haller
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Rainbow lizard
(Not eligible for votes)
Black Mac described how Dan, the
cell phone engineer, with Tiffany’s help, had learned the teleporting
technology was really quite small. It all fit in a small container in
the building at the bottom of the tower. This meant the technology was
either macro technology on this world, or had been designed on Earth.
All they had to do was steal the case along with its solar power source,
and move it where they wanted to set up. The tower was redundant since
it was the first the giants had built. The Pass Giants had confirmed
there were several more now, but used nothing more than a pole carved
from a very conductive native tree trunk.
I
now understood the simple pole at the landing.
Mac
addressed me.
“Popeye, Shiv is leading a trading expedition to the pass. We are short
of flint and could use a few more robes. Monsoons are due in about a
month and the pounding rain and yearly winds will be a chore to handle
without warm clothes and shelter.”
“Sure Boss. Count me in.” I looked forward to becoming useful.
“Ok,
hit your tent and get some sleep. Tomorrow Etalon here will give you
some weapons training and you will meet Shiv. The next day, they will
take you and a few others east to trade dried blue mushrooms for flints
and robes.”
I
got up gave my salutations and headed for my cot.
I
woke to the far off calls of Purple Screamers in the mountains, with the
dim amazement at how far the sounds carried. Etalon was slapping my
tent.
“Come Pop-eye, let us begin you training.”
“Coming Etalon, be right there.” I hustled out of the cot and wrapped my
robe on. The day was already warm, so I followed the Frenchman’s lead
and rolled my robe down to tie at the waist.
“Bring your bow et quiv-er Mon Ami.”
I
did as I was told. I found I was to join a group of three other men and
a woman in this class. I was the only one clothed.
Noon
found me proficient enough with an arrow, beginning to understand the
mechanics of a spear, and beginning to get comfortable with the throw of
a bolo. The rest of the group seemed about the same, with some becoming
more proficient with some weapons than others.
A
bald and naked man with tattoos on several of his well-defined muscles,
swaggered into camp with a hearty call.
“Yo,
family, lets get this party started.”
Etalon waved a happy greeting and pointed me out.
“Bonjour Shiv. I hope you have been well. Meet our new warrior,
Pop-eye.”
“Popeye huh. Welcome. If you are here, it means you are either an
escapee from the East or Mac brung ya. Either works for me.”
He
strode over and shook my hand.
“By
the way you’re clutching the belt on that skirt; I figure you just came
in from the landing, not from the people ranch. You got enough
experience and balls to sneak past the Screamers and hang out with giant
Sasquatch?”
I
replied, “Do you ever have enough experience to sneak past Screamers and
hang out with Sasquatch?”
“Good point. Keep thinking that way and you’ll live longer. Who else are
we takin’ Etalon?”
“Ovair there, we ‘ave Pete, Mutt, Oliver et Princess.”
Shiv
laughed aloud. “Princess huh. Wonder if we need to take some maids in
waitin’”
A
spear appeared quivering in the packed dirt between his legs.
He
smiled and winked at the female member of our party. “Guess not.”
“C’m
here crew,” Shiv growled as he dropped to sit cross-legged in the dirt.
We all joined him in a circle to watch as he scratched a map in the
earth.
Pointing to a line he had drawn, he said, “This is the coast.”
Perpendicular to the line, he drew a wavy line towards a saw tooth line
he drew in the dust. “This is the trail to the Pass Giant’s camp. It
should take us about seven days. On the way, we will collect the blue
mushrooms, and above the falls we will pick the huge briar berries. We
start out traveling light, but by the time we get to Tiffany’s we will
be packed right down.”
He
looked around slowly to see how we were taking in the information, then
continued.
“Normally I wouldn’t warn you about the screamers until we climbed the
waterfalls, but there has been a new danger discovered just last week.
The lower falls camp just lost a man to a reptile of some kind. They
call it the Rainbow Lizard. Imagine a Gila Monster with a luminescent
rainbow paint job. They think the thing is about eight feet long and
moves like a tortoise until it attacks. It then moves like a cobra.”
Eyebrows went up, but nobody spoke.
“This critter killed the man with one bite. He simply bit, dropped the
guy, and continued to hunt the team. They climbed a cliff. It seems this
thing isn’t good with elevation. It wasn’t built to climb. While it was
fussin’ over the team, one guy who was following behind, tried to rescue
the guy that was down, but the bite on the leg had either killed him or
paralyzed him so deep the victim couldn’t even blink his eyes. The
rescuer damn near lost his life heading for safety when the lizard came
back for supper.”
Shiv
stopped drank from his water skin and continued.
“We
haven’t figured out what their territory is, but so far, only one has
been seen and it lives near the bottom of the upper falls.”
He
drew two lines across the path east. “This is the lower falls, this is
the upper falls. I say we can’t sleep in here.” He drew a circle around
the area that was met with nods all around.
“OK.
We leave early in the morning. Get plenty of rest. You’re gonna need it
to climb the falls.”
By
evening of the second day, we were at the base of the lower falls. It
didn’t take long to set up camp, but we build a larger fire than normal,
then a smaller one to cook with. All of the crew had sacks half full of
the neon blue mushrooms, mostly picked last evening when the sun was
down. The glowing fungus was easy to find and the harvest was quick. We
had a half skin of the delicate morsels steaming over the fire.
Relaxed in camp, I got to know the rest of the crew some. Shiv was the
classic “A” type leader. It was easy to tell we were not to take his
rules of the road lightly.
His
camp instructions were clear and short. Room for discussion wasn’t
considered. I noticed Etalon didn’t object when Shiv anglicized his name
to Stud. He even grinned as the brawny bald man slapped his back with
the title. Sitting around the campfire, I got the stories of Pete, Mutt,
Oliver, and Princess. Pete was a farm implement salesman from Omaha. I
asked him why his name was so normal and his brow furrowed as he
replied.
“I
like Pete.”
I
figured he was a little short winded for a salesman, but I questioned no
father. Instead, I changed the subject. “Well, Pete, how did you get
here?”
“Same as you. I run into Mac at a convention. Dunno how, but he knew my
wife had picked up with the local sheriff and I didn’t have a home to go
back to.”
“Sorry Man, didn’t mean to pry.”
“Don’t worry about it. I ain’t over it yet, so I don’t talk about it
much, but Mac showed me the button and I ain’t looked back.”
I
left it at that, and directed my questions to Mutt. I could tell why he
got the name, so didn’t ask. Mutt was one of the most homely men I ever
met, but he seemed to have a pleasant disposition.
“How
about you Mutt, What brought you here.”
“Same thing I guess. I never had any friends until I came here. Mac was
the first one who ever cared whether I lived or died. Never knew my
father and my mother died when I was ten. Since I got to Terra, I have
started living my life for the first time instead of just existing. How
about you?”
Since these folks hadn’t heard my story, I spilled it out. Watching
their nods of understanding, I asked.
“How
is it I can spill my guts in a court room back home and no one believes
me? Even though exonerated, I had become a pariah.”
Shiv
looked over his shoulder while skinning a Lump back. “’Cause Black Mac
don’t recruit no shit-heads.” He turned and went back to his chore.
I
nodded along with everyone else. This was indeed a fact I had noticed.
Shiv
addressed us with his back turned, “That don’t mean they ain’t no
shit-heads on Terra. The giant apes ain’t nearly as picky as Mac.”
How
about you Oliver?
“Story’s the same Mate. I was cryin’ like a little girl in my back
garden in Leeds. I had just buried me Mum down at the Beckett Street
Cemetery and had run fresh out of relatives. Mum was all I had.”
I
noted Oliver was probably only in his late twenties. He continued his
story.
“Mac
was at the funeral. I had wondered what he was doing there, it was just
me and the mortuary crew… and him. I had been home only an hour or so,
and I heard a knock on my side gate. I rose to see who it was, and there
was Mac. The button he showed me was in me own bloody garden shed.”
After a short silence to see if he had more to say, I looked at Princess
and asked, “Princess?”
She
stood and walked closer to the fire. There was a slight chill in the
night air by the falls and we all felt it.
“I
had cancer. My parents are high-class snobs in L.A. and had disowned me
years ago. My Greenpeace actions didn’t fit with their big oil money.”
She sat by the fire.
“My
boyfriend rolled up in his dreads and split when he found out I had to
fight for my life. It turned out he really wasn’t worth a shit when it
came to a fight. Mac found me loaded with chemo, bald as Shiv and hooked
to a dozen machines. He didn’t have to talk long to get me to press the
button on my IV pole.”
“Are
you OK?” I was stunned.
“Blue mushrooms cured me. I have been more than healthy since eating
them. I could never have lived this way back home. Imagine a Greenpeace
wench who was afraid of the woods.”
We
all smiled and reflected into the fire.
Shiv
jumped to his feet, bow and quiver in hand. “Get into a tree. NOW!”
The
camp exploded into action and I joined the jump for the hardwood. I was
sixteen feet up a trunk I couldn’t have scaled unless I was scared. I
stopped to look back but couldn’t see anything but sweat shined crew in
trees around me.
“What is it?” demanded Mutt.
“It’s a fuckin’ dragon shit-head. Look beyond the fire, at the base of
the cliff. Look at the dark triangle where the firelight don’t reflect.
Look low.”
We
saw it. Mirrored eyes surrounded by a muted filtering rainbow of color.
It charged the camp and bit the pile of lump back as it passed, avoiding
the fire, it planted at the bottom of my tree. The Rainbow Lizard swung
around and began beating the tree with a massive armored tail. It was
all I could do to hold myself in the quivering branches. The creature
was dancing on my bow and quiver while beating my sanctuary.
A
spear shot out of the nearby foliage. Princess had pitched with all the
leverage she could get while hanging from branches. The weapon simply
bounced back with no more effect than to make the dragon mad.
Etalon let an arrow fly, and this time it stuck. The shaft quivered from
the metallic sheen of its back. The lizard pitched in a wild roll, then
righted and continued to beat my tree. Another arrow zipped in from
Shiv’s perch and lodged in the short neck between head and shoulders.
The thrashing creature rolled again. This time Etalon drove a shaft deep
in its chest and the lizard died.
We
gave it a good ten minutes before Shiv suggested we get down and eat. It
seemed these animals are loners, which spelled a great deal of relief
for a hungry and tired troop. We now knew the lizard had a larger
territory than first thought.
We
ate lizard that night, and climbed the falls cliff in the morning with a
fine shiny hide rolled on the back of Stud’s pack. No one ever called
him Etalon again. He was now officially Stud.
We
picked huge berries for a few minutes, between the falls, but our packs
were heavy fro the last big climb. At the top of the falls, Shiv herded
us into the bush and made us pull our robe hoods on.
With
a stern warning, he pointed at the sand tracks we made by the river. “We
are officially now in Purple Screamer territory. That’s where we lost
Randy. Stay quiet and stay in the shade as much as you can.”
We
headed up the well-worn game trail toward the Pass Giant’s camp and the
fabled Tiffany of the Giants.
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